Drafting my Cover page

The start of my drafting gave me this basic outline with the colour scheme and the white space being far to off.

This second draft was much more successful with the correct white space, a better masthead and the colour scheme was much better to. I also changed the cover line to make it easier to read.
















This is my third draft with a better all round composition and added cover lines. I have changed the positioning of the puff and added more aspects relating to NME magazine for example the "+" section